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Post by Aubrey Pedersen on Jul 31, 2006 0:11:45 GMT -5
I don't like it very much, so if you guys could please read it and tell me what you think, I'd really appreciate it!
Note: The ideas are based off the 100-fic challenge, but since I don’t know whether or not Sokkla is already taken there, I’m simply doing it unofficially.
Reasons To Be…
A Sokka/Azula shipper! 100 short fics designed to show you why Sokkla can be your one true Avatar pairing. Done: 1/100. This update: New Years.
To say that Sokka was confused as he wandered the Fire Nation palace that morning would have been a severe understatement. It was certainly not the same palace he’d gone to sleep in. The many columns had been transformed; they were now wrapped with vines of some kind of flowering plant. Large vases with bamboo, plum blossoms, and pine sprigs had been set up in every corner, and everywhere he looked there were glass jars or dishes containing oranges, tangerines, and several different kinds of candy.
He picked up one of the strange shaped things from one of the dishes and put it in his mouth. He chewed on it slowly, thinking of what it could be.
“It’s candied melon,” said a voice behind him. Sokka turned, a guilty grin on his face, to see Azula standing there with her hands on her hips. As he surveyed the new red silk robe she had on, he really hoped he hadn’t been doing something he wasn’t supposed to.
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Post by Angelique on Jul 31, 2006 0:30:25 GMT -5
It has me asking questions like "what's Sokka doing there?" - not sure if that's helpful.
And it's very rich in detail.
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Post by Aubrey Pedersen on Jul 31, 2006 0:33:36 GMT -5
Which doens't tell me at all if you like it XP.
What Sokka is doing there will be explained later *cough*ZukoandKatara'sWedding*cough*
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Post by Angelique on Jul 31, 2006 0:50:33 GMT -5
Ok - you want just a simple "I like it" - "I don't like it"
In that case, I like it - it grabs my attention.
Better?
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Post by Aubrey Pedersen on Jul 31, 2006 0:51:32 GMT -5
I liked your first one too, don't get me wrong. I was kind of going for both anyway ^^. I'll keep your comments in mind, definitly!
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