The Sacrifice- Complete Work

[Aubrey Pedersen]

Okay, so I only have chapter 1 right now, but I'll have the others up before too much longer. You can read it below!

www.fanfiction.net/s/2784113/1/

And me, not being paitent enough to wait a day to upload the next part:

www.fanfiction.net/s/2784113/2/
www.fanfiction.net/s/2784113/3/

Let me know what you think!

[Neko]

I think it's great so far. I can't wait to read the rest! ^^

[Aubrey Pedersen]

^^

I added a break where I thought they'd put a commecial...and I feel evil now, which amuses me.

[Neko]

You're gonna be leaving cliffhangers a lot, aren't you? XP

[Aubrey Pedersen]

*shrugs* Not really. Now that I've started I'm not going to be able to stop writing until I get stuck. Since I actually have this story planned out, I won't get stuck. You'll be in cliff hangers, but not for very long.

[Neko]

Good. ^^